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<v Speaker 2>Enjoy today's episode with guest host Dave Bullis.

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<v Speaker 3>My guest new film Initiation, which he cod wrote. It's

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<v Speaker 3>a development executive, and so much more with guest Dan Benimore.

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<v Speaker 3>Hey Dan, thanks love for coming on the show.

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<v Speaker 4>My pleasure.

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<v Speaker 3>So Dan, just to get started, you know, since you've

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<v Speaker 3>listened to the show before, you know what the first

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<v Speaker 3>question is going to be. And that question, Dan is,

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<v Speaker 3>you know, how did you get your start in the

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<v Speaker 3>film industry?

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<v Speaker 4>Well, I mean, you know, for me, it's I mean,

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<v Speaker 4>I guess the real definitive moment was I came out

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<v Speaker 4>here to LA and I got an internship with a

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<v Speaker 4>production company, and then I was doing Apple about six

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<v Speaker 4>months and I pretty much you know, I ended up

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<v Speaker 4>getting hired as an assistant and then I got promoted

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<v Speaker 4>from there and eventually I became the head of development.

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<v Speaker 4>So it was sort of I mean, really, I guess

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<v Speaker 4>you broke it down, it would probably be when I

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<v Speaker 4>just first got hired from an intern to actually being

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<v Speaker 4>an assistant, and then it sort of snowball from there.

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<v Speaker 3>Now does that still work in a similar way, you know,

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<v Speaker 3>because you know things are always changing and with the

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<v Speaker 3>changing face of distribution and everything, is it still that

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<v Speaker 3>that that way where you think interns are used as

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<v Speaker 3>sort of like that farm system where they can be

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<v Speaker 3>brought up within an agency.

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<v Speaker 4>My opinion on it, you know, was that because I

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<v Speaker 4>was at a small company where basically, you know, the

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<v Speaker 4>principles of the company were right there, like you know,

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<v Speaker 4>you're dealing with them every day, and it wasn't you know.

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<v Speaker 4>I think that sometimes if you go for an internship,

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<v Speaker 4>you could get an internship with somewhere really cool, like

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<v Speaker 4>you know, like say, for example, I got an internship

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<v Speaker 4>with Lion Skate or something, right, so I'm a really

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<v Speaker 4>big company like that, I would just be a guy,

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<v Speaker 4>you know, one guy in this massive machine. I think

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<v Speaker 4>in a scenario like that, it would bet a little

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<v Speaker 4>bit harder to have the trajectory that I ended up

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<v Speaker 4>having at a small company because in a smaller company

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<v Speaker 4>you go act directly with the principles, They get to

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<v Speaker 4>know you, and you know, it's a more it's so

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<v Speaker 4>much more personal relationship, and so it's not I don't

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<v Speaker 4>think it says when it's a bigger machine, you know,

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<v Speaker 4>I think you might have a tougher time having any

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<v Speaker 4>sort of you know, upward mobility like that.

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<v Speaker 3>Now, So when you went in there was that was

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<v Speaker 3>that your goal to be to be hired or did

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<v Speaker 3>you maybe have another aspiration, uh, to you know, to

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<v Speaker 3>or another goal to maybe work for another company, or

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<v Speaker 3>or maybe you know, just goal on your own.

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<v Speaker 4>Yeah, I mean I had no particular aspiration. I mean

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<v Speaker 4>you know, for the first week we went to the beach.

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<v Speaker 4>But then after that I was like, all right, what

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<v Speaker 4>are we going to do? So I figured it would

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<v Speaker 4>be worthwhile to try to learn, just learn as much

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<v Speaker 4>as I could, and so I actually had a couple

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<v Speaker 4>I think I had like two or three different internships

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<v Speaker 4>at the same time. And I just you know, I

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<v Speaker 4>had no real particular goal. I mean, I I've always

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<v Speaker 4>my endgame was always to be a writer. But you know,

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<v Speaker 4>when I first got to LA, I just figured as

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<v Speaker 4>much as I can learn, it's all positive. So I

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<v Speaker 4>just kind of showed up and you know, and things

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<v Speaker 4>things took the course they took.

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<v Speaker 3>Yeah, you know, And and you know that that's great

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<v Speaker 3>because you know, because I have had friends who have

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<v Speaker 3>moved out and uh, you know, the thinks are the

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<v Speaker 3>same thing. They're like they always felt guilty about not

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<v Speaker 3>being outside because they're like, look, it's a beautiful day out,

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<v Speaker 3>the beach is down the street. What the hell are

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<v Speaker 4>You know? Yeah, yeah, for sure, man. I mean the

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<v Speaker 4>longer you're here too, the less you go.

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<v Speaker 3>Until until like somebody, like a relative or something comes right,

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<v Speaker 3>and then you're like.

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<v Speaker 4>Oh yeah, yeah, yeah, yeah exactly.

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<v Speaker 3>Uh So you know this, And since we're talking about

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<v Speaker 3>this part of your career, I want to ask, you know,

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<v Speaker 3>didn't get a chance to ask from this, but what

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<v Speaker 3>are some of the skill sets that did you think

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<v Speaker 3>that you had at this point that really helped you

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<v Speaker 3>stand out? And really help them. Uh, you know, your

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<v Speaker 3>bosses and your managers that that they you know, they

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<v Speaker 3>they saw you, and they saw your skill set, and

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<v Speaker 3>they they wanted to keep you. So do you you

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<v Speaker 3>any like any of the skills off hand that that

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<v Speaker 3>you think that really helped you, you know, get that promotion.

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<v Speaker 4>You know, it was funny because I started and at

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<v Speaker 4>the end, I was in charge of the interns. So

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<v Speaker 4>I would, you know, I would kind of manage the interns.

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<v Speaker 4>I would, you know, me and other people at the company,

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<v Speaker 4>of course, but I think primarily I was part of

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<v Speaker 4>my job, so I would kind of see, you know,

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<v Speaker 4>you would give some interns, like you give them a script,

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<v Speaker 4>and you know, there were times when I was really

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<v Speaker 4>busy and I genuinely needed to have like a really

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<v Speaker 4>in depth creative discussion about a script, and I didn't

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<v Speaker 4>have time to read it. I would give it to

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<v Speaker 4>an intern to read, and then I'd get up, you

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<v Speaker 4>know and say, hey, do read that a script? What'd

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<v Speaker 4>you think? And you really it was very noticeable, and

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<v Speaker 4>it's actually interesting. So now a couple of years are

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<v Speaker 4>passed since I was at that job, the guys that

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<v Speaker 4>were my interns that I could tell had something extra,

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<v Speaker 4>they've had continued success, like they've transitioned to other jobs

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<v Speaker 4>where they've they you know, some of them would become

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<v Speaker 4>produced filmmakers, some of them work at other companies now.

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<v Speaker 4>And you know you can tell the guys who basically

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<v Speaker 4>had confidence, they had opinion. That's pretty much what he

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<v Speaker 4>blows down to. You know, if if I got up

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<v Speaker 4>and I would ask him in turn, like hey, when

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<v Speaker 4>do you think of that script? And he was just

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<v Speaker 4>like yeah, all right, you know, like that that's a

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<v Speaker 4>that's not really what you're looking for. You know, you're

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<v Speaker 4>looking for somebody who has confident as an opinion and

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<v Speaker 4>also is like has a strong opinion. You know, Like

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<v Speaker 4>so if I like something and you know the intern

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<v Speaker 4>that I'm checking in with him and he didn't like it,

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<v Speaker 4>and and I say, well, you know, I thought, you know,

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<v Speaker 4>I felt this work and that work, and he kind

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<v Speaker 4>of backs off his opinion. I think that is also

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<v Speaker 4>another thing that like, your opinion is your opinion, and

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<v Speaker 4>it's important, in my opinion, to be strong in your

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<v Speaker 4>convictions because once you waffle, he kind of lose credibility,

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<v Speaker 4>you know, So stuff like that, I think, and then

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<v Speaker 4>also just the basics, right, like just being responsible, like

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<v Speaker 4>you're if you're giving a job to do, do it

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<v Speaker 4>to the best of your ability, be on time, be

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<v Speaker 4>pleasant to deal with. You know. It's that that type

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<v Speaker 4>of stuff really important too.

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<v Speaker 3>So would you ever sit down with a lot of

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<v Speaker 3>these interns and go over things like this is how

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<v Speaker 3>you read a screenplay and these are the things to

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<v Speaker 3>look for.

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<v Speaker 2>You know?

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<v Speaker 3>Would you do stuff like that?

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<v Speaker 4>Yeah? Well, I mean when you would first bring them in,

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<v Speaker 4>you know, I mean we we had our own template

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<v Speaker 4>and stuff like that, but that you know, typically if

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<v Speaker 4>somebody is coming in to be an intern at a

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<v Speaker 4>production company, we want them to have some reading experience

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<v Speaker 4>because we don't want them starting from asslot the scratch,

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<v Speaker 4>I mean, then they have no real place to have

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<v Speaker 4>a strong care of opinion. So usually we try to

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<v Speaker 4>scripts and maybe they you know, whatever that might be,

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<v Speaker 4>and hopefully, you know, start from there.

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<v Speaker 3>So was there ever a you know, a time when

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<v Speaker 3>when you you know, you read a screenplay and maybe

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<v Speaker 3>you loved it and you wanted to get a feel

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<v Speaker 3>for all these interns, and maybe you gave it to

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<v Speaker 3>them and there was a point where they said, hey,

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<v Speaker 3>you know, hey, boss, we we rooted it like this,

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<v Speaker 3>and then and then maybe you said like, hey, yeah,

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<v Speaker 3>I loved it actually, and and was therever there was

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<v Speaker 3>there ever a time like that?

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<v Speaker 4>Sure, yeah, I mean always, I mean that's but that's why. Yeah,

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<v Speaker 4>that's what you need, uh, you know, readers for basically

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<v Speaker 4>to kind of check you so you can get a sense,

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<v Speaker 4>you're like, you know, I think this is great, but

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<v Speaker 4>it's pretty pretty weird. You know, you need a lot

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<v Speaker 4>of times you need that extra voice to kind of

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<v Speaker 4>often in the situations like that, I would actually have

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<v Speaker 4>more than one person read it. I'd have like five

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<v Speaker 4>at sort of the general response and and you know

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<v Speaker 4>compare and see what was consistent and stuff like that.

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<v Speaker 3>Yeah, and that's two Verger takeaways too, is uh, you know,

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<v Speaker 3>one have confidence and to have an opinion.

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<v Speaker 2>We'll be right back after a word from our sponsor,

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<v Speaker 2>and now back to the show.

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<v Speaker 3>You know, that's very important to mention Dan because I,

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<v Speaker 3>and you have to have that opinion, which you know,

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<v Speaker 3>if you're as a director, you need that. As a

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<v Speaker 4>Yeah, that's and that you know, it's it's a funny

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<v Speaker 4>thing because it comes back on you in so many

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<v Speaker 4>different ways because if you project confidence and it's even

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<v Speaker 4>on the page. You know, if you project confidence on

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<v Speaker 4>go into a development beating or whatever, you can kind

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<v Speaker 4>of slay people. Like people want to buy into that confidence. Like,

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<v Speaker 4>you know, somebody's sitting down to read script, if that

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<v Speaker 4>if you, as the writer have a really strong take

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<v Speaker 4>and they want to trust your credibility. As a writer,

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<v Speaker 4>So it's so important. Well, I think once you it's

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<v Speaker 4>not to say that like, oh you know, don't be

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<v Speaker 3>So what are some of the things that you notice,

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<v Speaker 3>you know, what are some of the things that usually

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<v Speaker 4>Yeah, absolutely, I mean it's I think it's a lot

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<v Speaker 4>of different things. I think I think one thing for

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<v Speaker 4>or we're not. But you're not going to hang around

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<v Speaker 4>and hold our hand you know, I think that that

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<v Speaker 4>a very noticeable difference from when you're reading a script

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<v Speaker 4>maybe by a more beginning writer. You can tell the

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<v Speaker 4>level of confidence in terms of a shorthand of communicating information,

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<v Speaker 4>you know, where it's you and it's it's asking a

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<v Speaker 4>I think that you when you when you read something

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<v Speaker 4>more dynamic experience. The worst thing you can do is is,

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<v Speaker 4>you know, have something where it's just spelling it out

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<v Speaker 4>to you, you know, in every way, whether that dialogue

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<v Speaker 4>or just the slowness of the presentation of information or

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<v Speaker 4>presenting old ideas as if they are new ideas. You know,

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<v Speaker 4>and there's there's you know, the audience now is so

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<v Speaker 4>savage that it's really you know, there's a lot that

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<v Speaker 4>can be done in shorthand, and if you're not using

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<v Speaker 4>that shorthand, I think that's where you can kind of

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<v Speaker 4>get into a scenario where it doesn't come across so

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<v Speaker 3>Yeah, I do agree. The audience is very savvy now.

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<v Speaker 3>I mean, you know, sometimes I'm watching movies and I see,

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<v Speaker 3>you know, cliches and and I'm always thinking to myself,

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<v Speaker 3>you know, if they I wonder if if they're writer,

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<v Speaker 3>the director, whoever it was. I'm We're always wondering, you know,

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<v Speaker 3>why didn't they try something else? You know what I mean?

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<v Speaker 3>Because you know, now, Dan, what I do with the movies.

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<v Speaker 3>I'm always dissecting them in my head, not not even

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<v Speaker 3>just you know, a piece of paper, but in my head,

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<v Speaker 3>I'm always thinking to myself, you know, is this a setup?

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<v Speaker 3>Is this is you know, what would the payoff be?

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<v Speaker 4>You know?

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<v Speaker 3>Uh, you know, I wonder what the inside the incident

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<v Speaker 3>is going to be and when it finally comes there,

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<v Speaker 3>you know you know what I mean. I mean, do

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<v Speaker 3>you do the same thing? Do you said? You know

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<v Speaker 3>when you watch movies? Now, are you just dissecting them

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<v Speaker 3>and and sort rumors, trying to getting ahead of the

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<v Speaker 3>story to see if you could, you know, predict what

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<v Speaker 4>Yeah, I mean I'm pretty much ruined as an audience

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<v Speaker 4>member at this point. I mean, I remember, I remember

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<v Speaker 4>I used to when I was when I was in college.

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<v Speaker 4>I would go my buddy and we would sneak, you know,

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<v Speaker 4>we would both see one movie and then sneak around

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<v Speaker 4>the theater and we would do that for like twelve hours,

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<v Speaker 4>and we would see every movie that was in theater.

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<v Speaker 4>And I can actually should and watched literally, I watched

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<v Speaker 4>literally anything. But now you know, I'm such a that's

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<v Speaker 4>an awful audience member. I'll find something, you know, like

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<v Speaker 4>stuff in there that I just I'm watching it and

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<v Speaker 4>I'm just like, ah, man, you know, I'll turn off,

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<v Speaker 4>Like I'm I'd become such a terrifable audience member exactly

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<v Speaker 4>because of what you're talking about, because we were in

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<v Speaker 4>it so much that it's like you stop consuming it

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<v Speaker 4>kind of as like a regular consumer. You become a

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<v Speaker 4>lot more sort of like hypocritical when you're when you're

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<v Speaker 4>watching stuf because they're always thinking about the design of

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<v Speaker 3>Yeah, I know what you mean, because sometimes you know,

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<v Speaker 3>I watch movies, right even if you're a trailer now

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<v Speaker 3>and uh, I'll say, let me guess what happens in

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<v Speaker 3>this movie. And sometimes, you know, I'll stay out in

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<v Speaker 3>do you would you get that from seeing this? And

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<v Speaker 3>I'm just like, because I just you know what I mean,

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<v Speaker 3>you see that stuff, you see those points, you know

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<v Speaker 3>what I mean, Like there was you know, Okay, well,

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<v Speaker 3>this sounds a little bit redundant, but the first time

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<v Speaker 3>and I told him exactly what I think happens in

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<v Speaker 3>the beat base based on the trailer, and he goes, wow,

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<v Speaker 3>you're really good at this. And I know I now,

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<v Speaker 3>granted obviously we don't go see Paul Blart Malkoff for

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<v Speaker 3>the writing, but but you know that's I was just

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<v Speaker 4>Yeah, I mean in general, you know that goes back

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<v Speaker 4>to the authorial conference thing, right, It's like, but soon

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<v Speaker 4>when you're starting the story, the audience is ahead of

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<v Speaker 4>you in the same way of what you're talking about.

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<v Speaker 4>Like if you set it up and they're they are

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<v Speaker 4>going to be predicting a certain storyline. So you the creator,

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<v Speaker 4>you got to kind of know that, and you're sort

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<v Speaker 4>of knowing that you have to give them something that's

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<v Speaker 4>at least a little bit different, because otherwise it's going

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<v Speaker 4>to be exactly like what you're talking about. The audience

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<v Speaker 4>is able to predict it like beat by beat, then

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<v Speaker 4>you're screwed. I mean, that's really you know, then that's

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<v Speaker 4>a really tough it's a tough place to get away

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<v Speaker 4>from if you're in that scenario. So you got to

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<v Speaker 3>Yeah, very true. And you know, I actually, you know,

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<v Speaker 3>just as we talk about all this writing and everything else,

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<v Speaker 3>I want to, you know, get get into your writing.

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<v Speaker 4>You know.

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<v Speaker 3>So did you always you know, have the inclamation that

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<v Speaker 3>you wanted to be a writer director?

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<v Speaker 4>some shorts, and then you know, for me, in the

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<v Speaker 4>pretty much told me that I would prefer to just

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<v Speaker 4>be the writer, which you know, I enjoyed it, but

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<v Speaker 4>it's just so all consuming. So I give a lot

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<v Speaker 4>of credit to my cousin in Orange, who directed our

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<v Speaker 4>movie Initiation. It's really an immersive thing that she kind

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<v Speaker 4>of just you give up. You got to put a

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<v Speaker 4>lot of yourself into it. So for me, I prefer

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<v Speaker 4>being the writer. I mean, the experience that we had

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<v Speaker 4>making this film, it's kind of like exactly what I

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<v Speaker 4>love about the being of the writer is that I

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<v Speaker 4>was able to come in and contribute to the story

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<v Speaker 4>and then they went off and made the movie and

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<v Speaker 4>I watched the movie. I mean that's you know, that's

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<v Speaker 4>like so that's when it's cool being a writer, because

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<v Speaker 4>it's literally like you wrote something on a piece of

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<v Speaker 4>paper and then you get to see that it exists,

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<v Speaker 4>and you know, it's pretty pretty neat.

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<v Speaker 3>looked dry MDB. I did see you have the short

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<v Speaker 3>then you you did direct Portrade, and you know, I

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<v Speaker 3>wanted to, you know, just ask you know, what was

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<v Speaker 3>the biggest difference that you found when you when you

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<v Speaker 3>challenges that you weren't anticipating or you know, did you

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<v Speaker 3>just say, you know what, I prefer to be a writer.

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<v Speaker 4>I mean, I think that when you're gonna direct, I

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<v Speaker 4>mean I very much. I love working with the actors.

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<v Speaker 4>I think working with actors is so fun. And you know,

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<v Speaker 4>if I ever end up directing again, it will be

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<v Speaker 4>because of that. The part that I felt, you know,

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<v Speaker 4>and you kind of have to be all in or

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<v Speaker 4>not in at all. For me, that was the visual authentic.

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<v Speaker 4>I had a really great uh cinematographer on my film Betrayed,

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<v Speaker 4>and you know, he was really good about like basically

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<v Speaker 4>checking me and being like, hey, that's not gonna look good.

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<v Speaker 4>Let's do it like this. You know, when you're when

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<v Speaker 4>you're promarier writer, you don't necessarily think in that and

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<v Speaker 4>the same tools. You know, if you're if you're someone

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<v Speaker 4>then you're gonna be doing the same study that you

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<v Speaker 4>and I do for a writing right where we we

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<v Speaker 4>that you know, uh, and obviously you and you want

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<v Speaker 4>but I just felt like for me, I enjoy sort

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<v Speaker 4>I tried to do directing thing. As much as I

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<v Speaker 3>Yeah, I you know, when when I I haven't directed

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<v Speaker 3>But you know, I find that it's not because I

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<v Speaker 3>don't want to. It's just because I've learned Dan that

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<v Speaker 3>the writing has to be not good, but great, you

421
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<v Speaker 3>know what I mean. Before you're going to do any projects.

422
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<v Speaker 3>I've learned that it has to be you have to

423
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<v Speaker 3>like you yourself whoever, you know, for everyone listening to this.

424
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<v Speaker 3>If you're writing something, you and yourself have to get

425
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<v Speaker 3>so excited about it, you're like, how the hell is

426
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<v Speaker 3>this not a movie made? Or Freddie if Nook, you

427
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<v Speaker 3>know what I mean, And you have to be so

428
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<v Speaker 3>And that's something that I've learned. So what I've I've

429
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<v Speaker 3>been doing. Is I took one step forward to take two.

430
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<v Speaker 3>I'm sorry, I took one step back to take two

431
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<v Speaker 3>steps forward. And basically what I mean by that is

432
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<v Speaker 3>I just wanted to make sure that I got better

433
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<v Speaker 3>at things. And during this whole five year period, I've

434
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<v Speaker 3>actually produced stuff. I've actually had a graphic novel get made,

435
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<v Speaker 3>you know, stuff like that. And but but it's really,

436
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<v Speaker 3>you know, it comes back to, you know, making sure

437
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<v Speaker 3>that writing is phenomenal and you when you when you

438
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<v Speaker 3>talk about writing, you know, I can you know, I

439
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<v Speaker 3>can hear you get excited about it in your voice,

440
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<v Speaker 3>and that's good exactly. You need that, right, So I

441
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<v Speaker 3>wanted to ask you, Dan, when whenever you're writing, you

442
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<v Speaker 3>know what I mean, like, is there any things that

443
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<v Speaker 3>you keep in mind to you know, make sure that

444
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<v Speaker 3>you're always sort of going forward if you know what

445
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<v Speaker 3>I mean.

446
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<v Speaker 4>Yeah, there's a million things. I mean. That's the part

447
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<v Speaker 4>that kind of it kind of sucks about the more

448
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<v Speaker 4>you learn about it, right because I mean when when

449
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<v Speaker 4>when I started, you know, you would it was a

450
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<v Speaker 4>little bit more free because you were just like, yeah, man,

451
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<v Speaker 4>you know, it's once you learn so much about it,

452
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<v Speaker 4>then there's so many different things that you got to

453
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<v Speaker 4>be thinking about, and so it actually makes you know

454
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<v Speaker 4>once you actually get on the page, I'm good. But

455
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<v Speaker 4>the planning, the planning stage, you know, there's a lot

456
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<v Speaker 4>that you have to be thinking about, and it helps

457
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<v Speaker 4>to just do it a million times. You know, I'm

458
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<v Speaker 4>very grateful for the time that I was a development

459
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<v Speaker 4>executive because I basically you know develop, uh, I mean

460
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<v Speaker 4>dozens of scripts and we made a bunch of the

461
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<v Speaker 4>movie too, so I really got to see the whole

462
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<v Speaker 4>process many times. And so that that helps because you

463
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<v Speaker 4>sort of get almost like a muscle memory for it.

464
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<v Speaker 4>But yeah, you've got so much stuff you have to

465
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<v Speaker 4>think about. You got you know, theme and character and

466
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<v Speaker 4>dialogue and arc and structure and mood, and it's, uh, yeah,

467
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<v Speaker 4>there's a lot to kind of manage.

468
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<v Speaker 3>Yeah, you know, one thing I've learned, and you know,

469
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<v Speaker 3>like you said, you the more you learn, the more,

470
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<v Speaker 3>uh you know, the more the more you do, the

471
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<v Speaker 3>more you learn, the more you learn, you know, you

472
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<v Speaker 3>realize how complex this gets. And you know, I've read

473
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<v Speaker 3>every screenwriting book on the market. I literally you know,

474
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<v Speaker 3>you can't see it because it's the podcast, but I

475
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<v Speaker 3>have every screenwriting book out there, and I've read it

476
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<v Speaker 3>from cover to cover. H you know, I've done what

477
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<v Speaker 3>everybody else does. You start with screenplay by Sidfield and

478
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<v Speaker 3>you work up to save the Cat. Then you get

479
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<v Speaker 3>story by the Key, you know, any sort of and

480
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<v Speaker 3>then you sort of branch off from there if you

481
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<v Speaker 3>read the Three Works, because you know, everyone sort of

482
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<v Speaker 3>talks about it. But one thing I've learned over the

483
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<v Speaker 3>years is that everything comes back to character, you know

484
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<v Speaker 3>what I mean, like everything, you know, when we talk

485
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<v Speaker 3>about scenes, when we talk about favorite parts of a movie,

486
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<v Speaker 3>when we talk about this or that, it always stems

487
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<v Speaker 3>from a character.

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<v Speaker 4>I mean, it's very true. Yeah, I mean I would

489
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<v Speaker 4>always say when we would you know, when I was

490
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<v Speaker 4>a I'm executive and we try to put a movie together,

491
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<v Speaker 4>it was pretty in every ready we made that actually

492
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<v Speaker 4>ended up getting made, there was always a moment where

493
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<v Speaker 4>we would attack somebody that was meaningful, whether that was

494
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<v Speaker 4>an actor or director or whatever, and that person when

495
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<v Speaker 4>they would come in, it wasn't like they said, you

496
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<v Speaker 4>know why I'm doing this movie because I love the

497
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<v Speaker 4>you know the midpoint, Like no nobody ever said that.

498
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<v Speaker 4>It was always about whatever the emotion was of it

499
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<v Speaker 4>or whatever the character thing was that we were doing.

500
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<v Speaker 4>That was what they would key in on and say, man,

501
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<v Speaker 4>you know, I really meant something to me and I

502
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<v Speaker 4>got company out of that. So yeah, nobody, it's it's

503
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<v Speaker 4>all you know, the plot is informed by the character,

504
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<v Speaker 4>and then they have to they have to not only

505
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<v Speaker 4>coke this, but actually sort of be intrinsic to each other.

506
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<v Speaker 4>Like the the best movies are movies where the plot

507
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<v Speaker 4>has to happen because of the character. Like those two.

508
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<v Speaker 4>They can't exist out plot of each other.

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<v Speaker 3>Yeah, you know, it's very true. And I think the

510
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<v Speaker 3>mistake a lot of writers make and and I've made

511
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<v Speaker 3>this mistake, you know, more times than I can count, is,

512
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<v Speaker 3>you know, developing a plot and trying to plunk characters

513
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<v Speaker 3>insaid plot, if you know what I mean.

514
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<v Speaker 4>Yeah, And I think.

515
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<v Speaker 3>When when you yeah, when you try to reverse that,

516
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<v Speaker 3>when you try to reverse engineer or something like that,

517
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<v Speaker 3>I think that's where you sort of get stuck. Yeah,

518
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<v Speaker 3>so you know, when you know your new movie initiation, uh,

519
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<v Speaker 3>it's it's being you know, distributed by Gravitas Ventures. Congratulations,

520
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<v Speaker 3>by the way, that's freaking huge.

521
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<v Speaker 4>Yeah. No, we're we're we're very excited, you know, and

522
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<v Speaker 4>we're very proud of the film.

523
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<v Speaker 3>Yeah, I mean that that is, you know, absolutely phenomenal.

524
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<v Speaker 3>And I wanted to ask, you know, where, so where

525
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<v Speaker 3>did your idea come from for the film? You know,

526
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<v Speaker 3>did was this an idea that came to you or

527
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<v Speaker 3>was this just something that you know that that you've

528
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<v Speaker 3>been sort of working on for years?

529
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<v Speaker 4>So this this is actually something that you know, my

530
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<v Speaker 4>cousin Orn he had the initial idea. He had a script,

531
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<v Speaker 4>and he basically, you know, we being cousins, we both

532
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<v Speaker 4>live in LA I would always come hang with him,

533
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<v Speaker 4>and you know, he mentioned he was working on this

534
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<v Speaker 4>and at one point he you know, he I talked

535
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<v Speaker 4>about working on it together. And so basically I came

536
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<v Speaker 4>in and I co wrote it. I I you know,

537
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<v Speaker 4>we we ended up writing, revising that script and and

538
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<v Speaker 4>uh working on it together through to the end. And

539
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<v Speaker 4>and he directed the film and edited it and produced it.

540
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<v Speaker 4>And so I this was a situation where basically I

541
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<v Speaker 4>came in where there was already a product that existed,

542
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<v Speaker 4>and I just gave my sort of creative energy to it.

543
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<v Speaker 4>And I think that we both kind of compliment to

544
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<v Speaker 4>each other in that process, and you know that was

545
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<v Speaker 4>that was the process played out on this one.

546
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<v Speaker 3>So for those for those listening who aren't familiar with

547
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<v Speaker 3>the film, could you give us a brief exclamation about

548
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<v Speaker 3>the film then?

549
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<v Speaker 4>Yeah. So it's basically a group of strangers are kidnapped

550
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<v Speaker 4>and they're taken to this kind of my serious house

551
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<v Speaker 4>and they basically come to realize that they've been kidnapped

552
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<v Speaker 4>to take place in an initiation ritual for a cult.

553
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<v Speaker 4>And to be initiated into this cult, you have to

554
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<v Speaker 4>fight somebody to the death. And so these people that

555
00:26:38.920 --> 00:26:41.720
<v Speaker 4>are complete strangers to each other, they're just random people

556
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<v Speaker 4>and they're thrown into this insane situation and they have

557
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<v Speaker 4>to try to figure out a way to survive. And

558
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<v Speaker 4>that's what the movie is about.

559
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<v Speaker 3>Very cool, and it's actually cool that it's coming out

560
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<v Speaker 3>right around this time, you know, this full Halloween time,

561
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<v Speaker 3>you know what I mean. It sounds like the movie

562
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<v Speaker 3>that's wrapped out Alleyway.

563
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<v Speaker 4>Yeah, I mean, you know, it's well, what's what's been

564
00:27:02.000 --> 00:27:04.640
<v Speaker 4>cool about it is that it sort of it towes

565
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<v Speaker 4>the line between action and horror. So, you know, we've

566
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<v Speaker 4>been we've been really happy to see that a lot

567
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<v Speaker 4>of horror websites have reviewed the film and given us

568
00:27:13.279 --> 00:27:16.240
<v Speaker 4>nice notices because I think that it it's something that's

569
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<v Speaker 4>a pun movie for people that like horror movies, but

570
00:27:18.119 --> 00:27:20.359
<v Speaker 4>it's also a fun movie for you know, an action

571
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<v Speaker 4>fan thriller type of thing.

572
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<v Speaker 3>Yeah, that is very cool. And you know because I mean,

573
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<v Speaker 3>whenever you can see the horror you know, horror sites,

574
00:27:30.200 --> 00:27:33.319
<v Speaker 3>whenever they can get excited about something, you know, it's

575
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<v Speaker 3>always awesome because like we were talking about, with all

576
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<v Speaker 3>the films you know that we've seen and you know,

577
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<v Speaker 3>being able to sort of you know, spot the story.

578
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<v Speaker 3>You know, they've seen ton of horror films, so you know,

579
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<v Speaker 3>when you can get them on board of something, you

580
00:27:45.279 --> 00:27:47.119
<v Speaker 3>know what I mean, it's like, okay, great, now you

581
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<v Speaker 3>got something you know it could have if they like it.

582
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<v Speaker 3>I mean, what what's the general public going to think?

583
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<v Speaker 3>You know what I mean?

584
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<v Speaker 4>Right? Yeah, nol, And we've been I mean we've you know,

585
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<v Speaker 4>we have shown the film to a lot of people

586
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<v Speaker 4>at this point, and you know enough people where it's

587
00:28:01.640 --> 00:28:03.680
<v Speaker 4>it's a funny thing your relationship with your own work, right,

588
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<v Speaker 4>I mean, anytime you show us something to somebody that

589
00:28:06.799 --> 00:28:08.599
<v Speaker 4>knows you. You're kind of like, well, you know, they

590
00:28:08.680 --> 00:28:11.359
<v Speaker 4>might they might just tell me to be nice. So

591
00:28:11.440 --> 00:28:13.720
<v Speaker 4>they thought, like, but we we've shown it to so

592
00:28:13.720 --> 00:28:17.279
<v Speaker 4>many people, and then obviously I think we have you know,

593
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<v Speaker 4>on IMDb there's some some reviews linked and uh and

594
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<v Speaker 4>you know, Bloody discussed and gave us my review. And

595
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<v Speaker 4>we know these people that have no reason to tell

596
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<v Speaker 4>out one way or the other. Right, So when when

597
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<v Speaker 4>somebody that has no relationship to you tells you they

598
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<v Speaker 4>got something out of your work, then that that's uh,

599
00:28:34.440 --> 00:28:37.559
<v Speaker 4>that's big because then you figure, Okay, well maybe you know,

600
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<v Speaker 4>maybe it does work, you know, And and this is

601
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<v Speaker 4>a sort of more objective for that.

602
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<v Speaker 3>Yeah, exactly. And you know, I see that on the

603
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<v Speaker 3>IMDb page. It's up on Amazon Video right now. Is

604
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<v Speaker 3>there is there any other places that that people could

605
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<v Speaker 3>find the movie.

606
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<v Speaker 4>Yeah, it's all over. It's on It's on iTunes, on Amazon,

607
00:28:59.559 --> 00:29:02.240
<v Speaker 4>It's on PlayStation, it's on it's on a lot of

608
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<v Speaker 4>cable on demand providers. I was in I was home

609
00:29:05.079 --> 00:29:07.319
<v Speaker 4>in Baltimore, and I I saw it on my parents,

610
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<v Speaker 4>you know, cable at their house. It's on Blue Doo,

611
00:29:12.960 --> 00:29:19.000
<v Speaker 4>It's it's on the majority of video on demand providers.

612
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<v Speaker 3>And I will link to that everyone in the show notes.

613
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<v Speaker 3>I will make sure to links all those places that

614
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<v Speaker 3>you can check out the initiation. Uh, you know, I

615
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<v Speaker 3>wanted to ask, you know, also about the initiation. You know, Dan,

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<v Speaker 3>what's what's one thing you wanted you able to take

617
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<v Speaker 3>away from the film? I mean, did you I mean,

618
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<v Speaker 3>you know, did you want to have people leave going

619
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<v Speaker 3>you know, damn that was intense? Or was there any

620
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<v Speaker 3>other sort of theme that you wanted people to walk

621
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<v Speaker 3>away from that walk away from?

622
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<v Speaker 4>A friend of mine just watched it, and that was

623
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<v Speaker 4>pretty much what he emailed me, he said, and that

624
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<v Speaker 4>was intent the the you know what was cool about

625
00:29:52.599 --> 00:29:55.039
<v Speaker 4>it for me was that I think we succeeded. It's

626
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<v Speaker 4>something that I'm always trying to do, which is aked

627
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<v Speaker 4>with the genre movie and basically invest it with a

628
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<v Speaker 4>real meaning.

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<v Speaker 4>Meaning that it's not just kind of an empty genre

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<v Speaker 4>exercise that's actually it has a message and a point

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<v Speaker 4>to it that is emotional, that is you know, I mean,

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<v Speaker 4>this will be basically about the idea that no matter

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<v Speaker 4>what situation, you're kind of put into if you have

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<v Speaker 4>this sort of inner strength to defeat it, then no

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<v Speaker 4>one there's nothing anyone can do to you. And you know,

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<v Speaker 4>we sort of explore that in a lot of different

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<v Speaker 4>ways than the film, but it was something that, you know,

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<v Speaker 4>meant something to me, and I think that it gives

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<v Speaker 4>the film a weight that you know, if we sort

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<v Speaker 4>of just relied on all the genre stuff, it wouldn't

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<v Speaker 4>have that same weight to it. So that that was

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<v Speaker 4>the thing to me that I was most satisfied with.

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<v Speaker 3>You know, just as a side note, you know, a

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<v Speaker 3>screenwriting professor once told me a great piece of scream

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<v Speaker 3>writing advice, and that was when you're sitting down to

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<v Speaker 3>you know, brainstorm a concept or whatever for for your movie.

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<v Speaker 3>He said, this is a question you asked yourself, what

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<v Speaker 3>do you want audiences to leave? What do you want

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<v Speaker 3>audiences when they leave to take away from this movie?

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<v Speaker 3>Do you want them to say, oh my god, that

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<v Speaker 3>was hilarious? We know, And he's like that helps guide

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<v Speaker 3>you throughout the process when you're making the movie.

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<v Speaker 4>Yeah, for sure. I mean, you know you got to

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<v Speaker 4>you gotta do it for a reason. There's just too much.

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<v Speaker 4>There's too much stuff out there, all this it tasts

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<v Speaker 4>too long, it's too much of a pain in the

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<v Speaker 4>ass if you're not doing it out of some strong

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<v Speaker 4>impulse of And it doesn't necessarily always have to be heavy,

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<v Speaker 4>you know. I mean, we're like right now we my

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<v Speaker 4>cousin and I are talking about doing another film together,

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<v Speaker 4>and we're we're talking about doing one. It's a little

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<v Speaker 4>bit more sort of light at least in the tone.

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<v Speaker 4>And you know that that can be fine too, But

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<v Speaker 4>it's just whatever that impulse is that you have that

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<v Speaker 4>makes it interesting and exciting for you. You know, you

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<v Speaker 4>got to really feel strongly about that and kind of

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<v Speaker 4>and and key on that throughout the whole thing, you know,

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<v Speaker 4>because that's what you want the person who watches it

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<v Speaker 4>to have that thing feeling.

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<v Speaker 3>Yeah, And that's exactly right. And uh, you know, I

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<v Speaker 3>I think, you know, when we can finally convey that,

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<v Speaker 3>you know what I mean, Like I think, uh, you're like,

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<v Speaker 3>for instance, Quentin Tarantino, whenever he writes I'm thinking, that's

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<v Speaker 3>the same thing that people pull away from, is the

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<v Speaker 3>same mood he's in, you know what I mean, Particularly like,

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<v Speaker 3>heyful late, I have I have a you know, that's

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<v Speaker 3>sort of like a it was the same, but it

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<v Speaker 3>was different for him. And I sort of think that,

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<v Speaker 3>you know, you could sort of pull away what he's

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<v Speaker 3>what you know, what he puts into the script, if

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<v Speaker 3>you know what I mean. And and you know, I

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<v Speaker 3>wanted to ask, you know, Dan, as we know we

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<v Speaker 3>were talking about your your your future projects. I wanted

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<v Speaker 3>just to ask, you know, what does a typical writing

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<v Speaker 3>day for you look like?

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<v Speaker 4>Man if I can just get some time, it's really

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<v Speaker 4>time is the most important thing. I mean, I I'm

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<v Speaker 4>not for me. It's not like I'll write anywhere. I'll

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<v Speaker 4>write it at any time. I don't need to like,

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<v Speaker 4>you know, consult the muse or anything like. I can

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<v Speaker 4>just down it and bank some stuff out. But I

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<v Speaker 4>think that I have a tough time. I'm sort of

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<v Speaker 4>an impatient person, which I think is probably a pretty

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<v Speaker 4>important part of any fixed out that I have had

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<v Speaker 4>or will have is down you know. I'm just I'm

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<v Speaker 4>not patient to like just let things come as they may.

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<v Speaker 4>Like I want to get stuff done, and you know,

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<v Speaker 4>kind of that's always my ethos. So when I the

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<v Speaker 4>planning part of it, that's the part that takes forever,

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<v Speaker 4>like I'll do research, you know, on initiation. I did

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<v Speaker 4>research into military stuff on other projects I've written, you know,

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<v Speaker 4>I'll read like three books about it. But once it's

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<v Speaker 4>time to write and I actually have figured out the story,

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<v Speaker 4>I'm so I have such a burning desire to just

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<v Speaker 4>get it out of me and get it onto the page.

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<v Speaker 4>It's almost to the point where like I feel like

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<v Speaker 4>I'm going to lose it if I don't that it

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<v Speaker 4>comes very fast, you know, and I almost, I almost

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<v Speaker 4>will consciously try to set aside, you know, just a

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<v Speaker 4>couple of days or whatever where I know it's going

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<v Speaker 4>to just be kind of flowing out of me and

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<v Speaker 4>uh and just be able to kind of bang pages out,

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<v Speaker 4>because you know, that's I don't. I don't, Yeah, I mean,

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<v Speaker 4>it's just a difference in process. Right for me, The

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<v Speaker 4>real cracking of the story comes in the planning. The

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<v Speaker 4>actual writing is just putting the planning on a piece

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<v Speaker 4>of paper. So the writing itself is the fun part.

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<v Speaker 4>The hard part of the is coming up with the

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<v Speaker 4>actual story.

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<v Speaker 3>Yes, I could not agree more. That's something that I

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<v Speaker 3>found too, is that, you know, uh, because once I

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<v Speaker 3>have an outline or a treatment or anything, you know,

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<v Speaker 3>what I mean, like any even if it's a piece

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<v Speaker 3>of paper with some ideas, you know, scribble down on

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<v Speaker 3>it that looks like the journal from seven you know,

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<v Speaker 3>just something, I know where I'm going, you know what

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<v Speaker 3>I mean? And you know the biggest part that was

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<v Speaker 3>always you know where the plot is going. But then

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<v Speaker 3>I've realized always comes back to where the characters start,

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<v Speaker 3>you know what I mean. So you know when the

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<v Speaker 3>when the when the script starts is where the movie starts.

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<v Speaker 3>So then where do we find our characters when the

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<v Speaker 3>script starts?

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<v Speaker 4>You know, you know what I mean?

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<v Speaker 3>Or do they have something? Do they not have something?

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<v Speaker 3>You know, what's their desire?

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<v Speaker 4>Uh?

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<v Speaker 3>You know, what's what's their intention? With's their obstacle?

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<v Speaker 2>Yeah?

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<v Speaker 4>Yeah, for sure.

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<v Speaker 3>So Dan, I mean look going down on average, how often,

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<v Speaker 3>I mean, how many hours a day do you write?

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<v Speaker 3>I mean, is it like sometimes like a thirty minutes,

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<v Speaker 3>then sometimes maybe it's like two hours.

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<v Speaker 4>I think that on a day when I actually can

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<v Speaker 4>really you know why, I have nothing going, I can

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<v Speaker 4>really just hit and focus on writing, I'll usually I

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<v Speaker 4>think after like three or four hours, you got to

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<v Speaker 4>stop and I've done it. I've I've had times were

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<v Speaker 4>off Fitt, and I'll write for like, you know, I'll

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<v Speaker 4>write the whole day. But I think, as a general rule,

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<v Speaker 4>unless it's something where I've gone insane or I have

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<v Speaker 4>to you know, I think that three or four hours

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<v Speaker 4>of a focus writing, after that it t has to

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<v Speaker 4>become diminishing return just your brain kind of. It takes

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<v Speaker 4>a certain sort of brain muscle, I think to come

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<v Speaker 4>up with this stuff, and after a while you start

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<v Speaker 4>like you don't have that theme because you know, I mean,

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<v Speaker 4>it's sort of what we were talking about before, Like

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<v Speaker 4>each scene that you write, you really got to sit

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<v Speaker 4>and think about it and think about like, Okay, you know,

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<v Speaker 4>here's the regular version of this scene. Why is this

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<v Speaker 4>scene going to be somewhat cooler than the regular version?

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<v Speaker 4>Like how can I make it different? How can I

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<v Speaker 4>make a different not just in what happens, but in

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<v Speaker 4>how the characters interact with each other, with the visual

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<v Speaker 4>thing that I'm doing in this scene, with the reversal

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<v Speaker 4>in this scene. So it's so much like mental effort

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<v Speaker 4>to go into it that I think after three or

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<v Speaker 4>four hours I got to stop. So for me, a

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<v Speaker 4>good three or four hours of writing and then maybe

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<v Speaker 4>some research. You know, in the afternoon or a lot

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<v Speaker 4>of prep for the next day, you know, like okay

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<v Speaker 4>and tomorrow. I know, I got to write these thenes

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<v Speaker 4>just kind of what I'm thinking, and I at least

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<v Speaker 4>have a little bit of a roadmap of the actual

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<v Speaker 4>precise execution, and then you can kind of flow into

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<v Speaker 4>the next day.

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<v Speaker 3>Yeah, that's kind of like which I think Stephen King

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<v Speaker 3>maybe said that. He said basically, he he ends on

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<v Speaker 3>a high note that way, and the next thing he

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<v Speaker 3>comes in, he knows exactly where he's gonna go, and

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<v Speaker 3>he keeps that flow going on every day.

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<v Speaker 4>Yeah. I tend to do that as well.

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<v Speaker 3>Great mindset go alike. Uh, you know, and that and

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<v Speaker 3>that's great advice by the way. So you know, Dan,

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<v Speaker 3>in closing, you know, is there maybe anything that we

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<v Speaker 3>can talk about that you wanted to or any sort

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<v Speaker 3>of parting thoughts you want to want to add to

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<v Speaker 3>this conversation.

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<v Speaker 4>No, I mean, you know, I think the thing that's

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<v Speaker 4>cool to me about this project specifically, and I think

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<v Speaker 4>is relevant to what we're talking about and probably to

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<v Speaker 4>a lot of people listen to your podcast to you know,

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<v Speaker 4>this is something that any of us could do. You

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<v Speaker 4>could you you could have made this movie. You know,

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<v Speaker 4>anybody listening to this could have made this movie. It's

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<v Speaker 4>a movie that we made for a low budget. But

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<v Speaker 4>you know, one of the reasons that it's been so

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<v Speaker 4>cool getting some nice reviews from some herts cycles that

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<v Speaker 4>they basically said, yeah, it's a low budget movie, but

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<v Speaker 4>the sort of ingenuity and the effort that went into

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<v Speaker 4>it and that that made it it didn't. It doesn't

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<v Speaker 4>feel a little budge it, you know, like it's not

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<v Speaker 4>It's the point being that there's nothing stopping any of us.

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<v Speaker 4>I'm just going to make in a movie, and not

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<v Speaker 4>just a movie that we sort of is enabled gaming

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<v Speaker 4>for our own edification, but a movie that anybody can

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<v Speaker 4>sit down and watch and enjoy at a real movie,

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<v Speaker 4>you know, even if you have to do it for

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<v Speaker 4>a low budget. You know, and I think that this

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<v Speaker 4>is sort of to me a good case study of

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<v Speaker 4>that that we actually went made this movie, got it

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<v Speaker 4>distributed by a very legitimate distributor. It's out everywhere, you know,

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<v Speaker 4>and you know, we we've got a lot of nice

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<v Speaker 4>responses to the movie. So we do think that the

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<v Speaker 4>movie works, and you know, we we just look forward

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<v Speaker 4>to hopefully having people discovered, you know, and and maybe

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<v Speaker 4>we can go make another one.

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<v Speaker 3>You know, and that's that's phenomenal and uh, you know, honestly, Dan,

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<v Speaker 3>I'm gonna make sure check out the The initiat I

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<v Speaker 3>will everyone, I will link that in the show notes. Dan,

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<v Speaker 3>where can we find you out online?

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<v Speaker 4>I mean, you know, just stuck with the movie. I'm

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<v Speaker 4>not I'm like the worst person ever for all this.

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<v Speaker 4>I don't have a Twitter or I'm not a social

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<v Speaker 4>media dude. But The Initiation movie we have a website

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<v Speaker 4>with Facebook page, and obviously it's on iTunes, it's on Amazon,

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<v Speaker 4>it's all these other platforms.

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<v Speaker 3>Dan, I want to say thank you very much.

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<v Speaker 4>For coming on my pleasure, good conversation, Oh my pleasure, sir,

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<v Speaker 4>Take care, take care anyway, I want.

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<v Speaker 2>To thank Dave so much for doing such a great

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<v Speaker 2>job on this episode. If you want to get links

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<v Speaker 2>to anything we spoke about in this episode, head over

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<v Speaker 2>to the show notes at Bulletproof Screenwriting dot tv for it. Slash,

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<v Speaker 2>thank you so much for listening to guys. As always,

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<v Speaker 2>keep on writing no matter what. I'll talk to you soon.

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<v Speaker 1>Thanks for listening to the Bulletproof Screenwriting podcast at Bulletproof screenwriting,

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<v Speaker 1>dot tv,
